Feedback to the Rough Cut

The following is feedback to  the rough cut posted previously:

Chris – While the rough cut is in essence good, it lacks something, possibly within the execution but also possibly within the editing. Another scene may be necessary in order to break up the two scenes already possessed but without advancing the narrative.

Ashleigh – I also feel that the rough cut is missing an extra scene. As it is at the minute I feel as though the entire video is in a boxed in universe. This I feel goes against your target of having the audience feel as though they are participating within the video itself.

Amy – While the majority of the video has very little premise for synching with the music, I feel as though more could be done in the scene setting to link it in with the music. For example, there is a short instrumental intro which would be appropriate at this point.

Jack – The colours as they are at the minute are extremely vibrant, which doesn’t fit with the song’s moodier tone and expected bleakness, an idea would be to tone the colours down to create a moodier atmosphere.