Possible Fonts

I have found 5 possible fonts which I think will be suitable for my digipack items.

Font Ideas

I feel that for the font on both my album cover and poster should be simply outlines, this further encompasses the emptiness that the title track is trying to convey.

I will continue to investigate www.dafont.com until I find 5 suitable fonts, at which point I will attempt to get feedback.

Digipack Preparation

Now that I have improved upon my initial cut of my video, I feel it is time to move my attention to my digipack, which will contain:

 

• My music video, already produced and in constant editing
• A poster for the album
• A CD case for the album

These 3 will have to link in some way and this will have to be picked out of the design. I may take pictures for the design or I may simply use one of my own illustrations.

New and Improved Trailer

Final Cut Peregrine Wayman A2 Video from Perry Wayman on Vimeo.

Response to Feedback

In response to the feedback I am now planning to add a small amount of ‘filler’ or a more interesting scene. Perhaps one of the street simply going about it’s business. I feel this should be over an extended period of time and then sped up.

This would affect the mood of the music as it would show how the world is moving on without him and continues regardless of whether he wants it to stop or not.

In addition to this, I have decided to add a small intro, of the protagonists feet stepping up. I feel this allows an intro possibly with actual sound after the top and has increased symbolism in that the protagonist is stepping up the earth, ready to take it on and challenge it.

Feedback to the Rough Cut

The following is feedback to  the rough cut posted previously:

Chris – While the rough cut is in essence good, it lacks something, possibly within the execution but also possibly within the editing. Another scene may be necessary in order to break up the two scenes already possessed but without advancing the narrative.

Ashleigh – I also feel that the rough cut is missing an extra scene. As it is at the minute I feel as though the entire video is in a boxed in universe. This I feel goes against your target of having the audience feel as though they are participating within the video itself.

Amy – While the majority of the video has very little premise for synching with the music, I feel as though more could be done in the scene setting to link it in with the music. For example, there is a short instrumental intro which would be appropriate at this point.

Jack – The colours as they are at the minute are extremely vibrant, which doesn’t fit with the song’s moodier tone and expected bleakness, an idea would be to tone the colours down to create a moodier atmosphere.